© copyright 1998 by Ted Logan <ted@kenandted.com>
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1 | STARFIELD | 1 | ||
Opening credits on asteroids, etc. The Galatic flies by.
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2 | INT GALATIC BRIDGE | 2 | ||
The scene is overexposed, sugesting a dream. Subordiante officers at
their consoles, doing work. Pan to Captian Logan on the loft.
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3 | BATTLE SCENE | 3 | ||
Flash of bright light, cut to battle scene on the bridge.
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Status report. Port shields down to seventy-three percent. Primary weapons systems are offline. Evasive manuver fourteen. Aye, sir. They are coming around for another pass. Target their weapon systems. | ||||
4 | EXT GALATIC | 4 | ||
The alien ship, leaking fuel, moves in front of the Galatic and charges it.
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5 | INT GALATIC BRIDGE | 5 | ||
Logan climbs down the ladder and leans over a panel on the front of the
bridge. He looks up into the window and sees the alien ship. He stands up
as heis weapons straife the alien ship. The alien ship fires some
weapon that hits him in the chest. He tries to scream, but he can't.
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6 | INT GALATIC ENGINEERING FLOOR | 6 | ||
Logan lies on the floor with a laser burn on his chest. He finally succeds in
screaming. Cut to: | ||||
7 | INT WILLY'S ROOM | 7 | ||
Resume normal lighting. Willy wakes up with a start. Max sticks his
head in the door.
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Are you coming, or not? Departure is required in half an hour. | ||||
Pan around the room, showing various alien and sci-fi paraphanelia.
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8 | INT KITCHEN | 8 | ||
Wily huridly eats his breakfast.
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9 | INT HALLWAY | 9 | ||
Willy precariously carrying a bunch of stuff -- lego models, etc.
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10 | INT GARAGE | 10 | ||
Max in the driver's seat of the car with the garage door open. He plugs
a patch cord between his neural interface jack and the car's jack on the
cealing. Willy enters the car with his stuff and Max drives off.
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11 | EXT CAR | 11 | ||
montage as it drives to Heather's house
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12 | INT HEATHER'S LIVING ROOM | 12 | ||
Willy enters and dumps his stuff with Heather following closly.
We see Jonathan at the table playing with something. Add dialogue here.
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13 | INT HEATHER'S ROOM | 13 | ||
Heather pulls out various toy weapons and comm equipment and hands
them to Willy and Jonathan.
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14 | MAX DRIVING HOME | 14 | ||
He notices something in his rear view mirror, so he pulls over and sees
something like a metorite.
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15 | MOUNTAIN - WILLY, JONATHAN, HEATHER | 15 | ||
spread out on bare mountain talking on radios.
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(v.o.) Captian's log. We have landed on the desolate planet whatever and are searching for rogue Spyrians who have incursed in our space. Captian, I belive we have something. On my way. | ||||
Willy and Heather run to Jonathan's position and see a bush.
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Look at this, Captian. It appears to be schrapnel from their ship. | ||||
Willy pulls out a "scanning device" and walks around the bush.
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It appears to have come from their starboard engine casing. Judginf from the trajectory, the ship should be... there. | ||||
16 | MOUNTAIN - MAX | 16 | ||
climbs up to a ridge and looks.
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17 | MAX EYE VIEW - MOUNTAIN | 17 | ||
Pans and focuses and zooms on an alien spacecraft with aliens crawling around.
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18 | MAX | 18 | ||
pulls a cellphone out of his pocket and pushes a few buttons.
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Yeah, can I talk to George? (pauses) George, this is Max. I saw something that I think you should have a look at... No, I can't tell you what it is. This is an unsecure line, you know. (pauses) Yeah, my house. Bye. | ||||
Max puts the phone away and runs down the mountain.
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19 | MOUNTAIN | 19 | ||
Willy, Jonathan, and Heather run over hill in search of the Spyrians
and see the aliens and their alien ship. Willy tries to run, but he is
shot by an alien and falls down. Jonathan and Heather rush around him but
are pulled away by more aliens.
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20 | GARAGE - MAX | 20 | ||
Max pulls out a padd and pushes a few buttons. We see the padd as he
tracks Willy and his friends on the mountain as they go into a spacecraft
and blast off. George pulls up.
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Hey, Max, what's up? The cealing. Aliens. What? You heard me. | ||||
Max opens a cabinet and opens a secured weapons locker. He pulls out a
couple of guns and hands them to George.
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Wow, where'd you get all of this stuff? Let's just say my government contacts want me to be well protected. | ||||
Max takes one of the guns and goes over the systems.
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This is the Elcom 48-C modulated ion cannon. It features multiple target acquisition, dual gyroscopical stabilization systems, a neural interface jack, and a laser targeting system. Ok, and this will do what for me? | ||||
Max picks up a brick and walks out into the street. He hands the brick
to George.
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Here, throw this. | ||||
George throws the brick into the air and Max shoots it with the ion
cannon. The brick falls to the ground unscathed.
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Was that supposed to do anything? If I threw your diskman up there, it wouldn't work anymore. Would that be from the gun or the fall? The gun. | ||||
21 | EXT ALIEN POD | 21 | ||
as it leaves Earth's atmosphere and enters orbit.
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22 | INT ALIEN POD | 22 | ||
Willy, Jonathan, and Heather look out the window at Earth.
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Well, I guess we get to be astronauts now, huh? | ||||
The ship shifts and we see the alien mothership through the window.
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23 | EXT ALIEN POD | 23 | ||
as the pod flies towards the mothership and docks.
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24 | EXT CAR | 24 | ||
as Max and George drive to the alien landing site.
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25 | EXT MOUNTIAN | 25 | ||
Max and George carry high-tech weapons. They see a few
alien pods flying around. Max destroys two with his wrist
rocket and gets George to disable the other with his ion
cannon. It crashlands, Max and George run over, and an
alien comes out.
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I've been studying their language. I think I can communicate with them. Yeah, I hope so. | ||||
Max holds a handgun to the alien's head and says something
in an alien language.
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What'd you say? "Take me to your leader." Either that, or "Got a light, buddy?" | ||||
The alien turns to Max, holds up his index finger, and a flame comes
out of it. Max and George look at each other.
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26 | INT CELL | 26 | ||
The door opens and alien guards shove Willy, Heather, and Jonathan
in. They fall to the floor and the door closes. Pan around the
cell and see several alien races. A small alien species about
70 cm tall comes up and says something in their language.
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What did he say? I dunno. | ||||
One of the aliens runs back and returns with a crude dish
of food and sets it down. He sticks his finger in it
and eats it. Cautiously, Willy does the same.
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Not bad. | ||||
Jonathan and Heather crowd around and help themselves. One of
the larger aliens comes over and intercepts another small
alien carrying more food. Willy notices and stands up.
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That's not nice. Give me that. | ||||
The alien is frightened and gives the tray to Willy, who shares
it with the alien and his friends.
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27 | EXT POD | 27 | ||
as it, carrying Max and George, flies out of Earth's atmosphere
and towards the alien mothership.
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28 | INT POD | 28 | ||
Max and George watching out the window as the mothership
comes into view.
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Do you have some sort of plan? No. Don't bother me. I'm trying to think. | ||||
The alien pilot shouts excitedly.
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Well hurry up and invent one, because we're almost there. I'm thinking, I'm thinking. | ||||
29 | EXT POD | 29 | ||
as it flies towards the alien mothership and docks.
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30 | INT CELL | 30 | ||
Willy and friends slumped up aginst the wall. Willy
repositions himself and hits something hard in his
pocket. He pulls it out, and it's a small round
blinking device. He studies it and returns it
to his pocket.
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31 | INT ALIEN HALLWAY | 31 | ||
A door opens and Max and George step out. The door
slides closed and the pod they stepped out of blasts
away. George looks longingly at Earth far below.
Max scans the area with something.
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Come, on. We don't have all day. Down this way. | ||||
He starts off and pulls George. They ready their weapons.
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32 | INT ALIEN CORRIDER | 32 | ||
Max and George, acting very much like commmandos,
walk down the corridor until the reach a door with
alien writing.
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Can you read it? I think so. It either says this is the bridge, or the head. The head>? The, um, facilities. Aha. And this is where we have to go? Yep. How do we open it? Stand back. | ||||
Max steps back and readies his gun.
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Wait, I have a better idea. | ||||
He pushes a button next to the door and it opens.
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Study up on alien design? No, I just watch Star Trek. | ||||
33 | INT ALIEN BRIDGE | 33 | ||
Max and George enter with amazement. The look slack-jawed
at all the aliens around the bridge. Some WIllmark aliens
are yelling at the evil aliens, who beat them up. Other
aliens hang out.
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Hey! What are you doing? They speek English? How convient. | ||||
Max pulls a small sphere from his pocket and activates it.
It blinks and beeps.
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I have here a small thermonuclear device. When I relese it, it will destroy this ship. You're bluffing. Not at all. | ||||
After some though, the aliens stand down.
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Now that that's settled, I'd like my brother and his friends. | ||||
34 | INT ALIEN CORRIDOR | 34 | ||
Alien guards escort Max and George to the holding cell.
The aliens open the cell door but push Max and George inside.
The door shuts rapidly. Max and George sit on the floor.
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Great. I always hate it when this happens. You too? I guess I'm not the only one. | ||||
Willy, Heather, and Jonathan come up.
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Welcome to the dunegon. Make yourself at home. | ||||
George gets this huge smile but Max stops him.
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Don't. Great rescue attempt. Hey, I try. Not very hard. | ||||
Max walks over the the wall and scans it.
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Find anything? This section of the wall is weaker. Stand back. | ||||
Max opens his pack and hands Willy, Heather, and
Jonathan weapons. Max connects his gun to his neural
interface jack.
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Ok, on three. | ||||
The friendly aliens run up to Max's feet.
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Wait. | ||||
He bends down to the aliens and communicates with them.
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They're friendly. They'll help. How? Give them weapons. | ||||
Max digs into his pack and finds a few handguns. He distrubutes
them to the friendly aliens, who balence them in some ingenious
way.
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On three. One, two, | ||||
35 | INT CORRIDOR | 35 | ||
The wall explodes in a ball of flame. When it clears, everyone steps
out commando-style. They run down the corridor. Max stops and pulls
out the detanator and arms it and sets it down.
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Five minutes. What's that? A thermonuclear device. Let's go. | ||||
They reach a door and Max tries to open it.
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Allowe me. | ||||
He ppushes the button next to the door and it opens.
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36 | INT ALIEN BARRAKS | 36 | ||
The door opens and our heros look into a massive barraks.
Alien guards look up and grab their weapons and start
shooting. Extended effects sequence as the heros shoot
the guards.
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37 | MAX EYE VIEW | 37 | ||
as it tracks objects and aliens
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38 | INT ALIEN BARRAKS | 38 | ||
A few more shots fired and the heros stand up.
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Three minutes, twenty-eight seconds. | ||||
They walk through the carnage until a hideous "boss alien"
comes up. A bar wall comes between Willy and the rest of
the broup. Willy picks up a bar and it turns into a
light saber when he wacks it. The boss pulls out a light
saber and they have an extended battle sequence ending
with Willy killing the alien. Willy cuts the wall open
and all move to the exit.
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How much time? You don't want to know. | ||||
39 | INT CORRIDOR | 39 | ||
Willy first, followed by Max. George takes up the rear. Alarm bells
are going off. Some alien guards come out and are immediatly
shot. The heros reach a door and stop in front of it.
Max consults a padd.
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This is our ticket home. | ||||
George reaches for the nearby keypad but is shocked.
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You have to be gentle with these things. | ||||
He shoots the panel and the lights go out. He hits the wall
and the door opens.
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40 | INT POD | 40 | ||
The heros enter and pour over the control panels. Willy
closes the door. Max glances at his watch.
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41 | MAX'S WATCH - CLOSE UP | 41 | ||
showing it ticking from five seconds to two seconds.
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42 | INT POD | 42 | ||
Max and George examine the control panel and George finds
a button. He pushes it, and the pod rockets away.
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43 | EXT POD AND SHIP | 43 | ||
The pod rockets away moments before the ship explodes into
a giant fireball. The pod reenters Earth's atmosphere
into the sunrise.
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44 | INT POD | 44 | ||
Our heros watch the sunrise through the window.
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45 | EXT POD | 45 | ||
The pod flies over Boulder and lands in Heather's driveway.
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46 | INT HEATHER'S LIVING ROOM | 46 | ||
The heros are joined by a number of people, both adults and kids.
Different people tell their stories animatedly as others listen.
The friendly small aliens run around on the table filled with food
and examine the strange food. The Willmark aliens are in a group
talking to some people. Max is standing off to one side. George walks
up to him.
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So we saved the world from aliens, huh? Yeah, something like that. I can see the headlines now -- "Teenagers save world from certian destruction." I don't think they actually meant to take us over. They just picked the wrong planet to mess with, that's all. The wrong person, you mean. You were awesome with all of your guns. What did you call that thing? An ion cannon, or something like that? Yeah, that was the one. But the only reason I did it was because they messed with Willy. You mess with Willy, you better watch out. | ||||
George laughs. Zoom far out, out to ext house, out to the planet.
Start closing credits as view zooms out to solar system
and finally to galaxy.
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THE END. |